My blog post from the other day was just turned into a wonderful news release and distributed to the national media. It’s worth looking at the before and after versions.
My “before” news release, which was the bare bones of an idea, is on my blog for August 5th.
The “after” news release, expanded and polished by PR Web Direct, and with a stunning photo added, is now online at www.prweb.com/releases/2006/8/prweb421148.htm
Study both.
Ao Akua,
Joe
www.mrfire.com
PS — The next Manifestation Weekend will be Nov 10 – 11 in Austin, Texas. Price is just like the original one: $1,000. Only 25 can attend. If you’re interested, send an email to my assistant Suzanne at [email protected] If you want to know what the first weekend was like, see www.BeyondManifestation.com I hope to see you there.
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Hi Joe
You’re right! It’s much better now. I especially liked the improvement of this sentence:
He should know: after years of struggling with his own weight issues, he has lost 80 pounds, transforming himself from Bhudda-like proportions to an Atlas-like physique.
Perhaps because I always suspected that you yourself invented the “He was called the Bhudda of the Internet, now he’s the Charles(?) Atlas of the Internet”.
But that’s just me, sorry. Suspecious nature 😉
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Kind regards
Britt Malka
http://www.16min.com/en
Brilliant, Joe.
PS I want to send you an Amazon gift but need your PREFERRED Email address.
Thanks,
Terence
Austin
Joe,
Brilliant.
PS Please give me your best email address for a cyber-gift.
Terence
Austin
My email is [email protected]
thank you
joe